Admiralty Anchor: Difference between revisions

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 | loadout-kind=Anchor
 | loadout-attributes=
-{{Loadout positive|Creates an earthquake upon taking fall damage while active}}
+{{Loadout positive|Create earthquake upon taking fall damage while active}}
-{{Loadout negative|Takes crits from projectiles while airborne}}
+{{Loadout negative|On Wearer: Take crits from projectiles while airborne}}
 {{Loadout negative|+30% gravity while active}}
 {{Loadout negative|No random critical hits}}
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-{{Loadout neutral|"Prepare to be swabbed off the deck!"}}
+{{Loadout neutral|"I will not tolerate any crass jokes about the Navy in my unit.}}
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 | <poem>
-➕ Causes a powerful damaging earthquake when landing after ana mount of air time
+➕ Causes a powerful damaging earthquake when landing after an amount of air time
 </poem>
 | <poem>
-➖ No random crits
+➖ Has no random crits
-➖ Projectile vulnerability while in midair
+➖ Vulnerable to airshots
-➖ Use of the earthquake ability results in a lot of self-damage
+➖ Deals more self-damage upon landing
 </poem>
 |}